Hi Hugo,
I have been a long time Hiawatha user and i'm also an amature web developer. Just a couple of points from me:
- Font isn't great, you should use a nice basic serif so it's supported throughout. (http://i.imgur.com/diU4R.png)
- Margins are wrong, and you also need some extra padding in places.
- Hiawatha text on front page isn't legible enough
- The image is too generic - I thought I had been forwarded to "temporary hosting/spam site' (until I finally noticed the Hiawatha logo)
- it looks very corporate, not necessarily a bad thing but it looks generically corparate - maybe it's the colours - I like the current brown/orange theme - but maybe lighten them up a bit to make it look 'fresher'.
There are a few more points but they're more nit picky - I would be happy to knock up some ideas if I get time and post them here for a slightly different take.
Just my 2p, please don't take any offence in what I have said - just trying to be honest!
Regards,
Jack.
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